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Kiki's avatar

“They seemed companionable,

in their cargo pants and

matching blue checked shirts - almost

vulnerable,

sitting like that with outstretched legs

and a faint breeze ruffling their hair like

overgrown dolls,

or teddy bears.”

I feel for them. These words, “dolls” and “teddy bears,” make me see these two as lost boys—never to grow up, never lucky enough to grow old.

Jed Moffitt's avatar

I had an insight moment partway through, when you described the boys as they were preparing to make the choice to move away from togetherness and into the peculiar and seductive solitude of an altered state. I make no judgements of these choices. God knows I have made a few. Psychedelics are moving into a phase where they can clearly be therapeutic and if they could help and I was in confusion and fear, I probably would give it another go.

But for now, almost every choice I make favors connection, and I also lean into optimism irrespective of my probably naivete. I see these urban compositions of creature and nature...I don't know, David...is there a beauty to you there? Do they capture your eye because they are just peculiar and provocative, or is there embedded hope and beauty in the way that Nature patiently keeps trying to reclaim her own?

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