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Your Story Sounds Nice. Now Tell Me Why I Should Care: An Agent's View on Stakes

I read a lot of queries that sound...

Feb 1 • Renee Fountain

Losing Your Voice: Why Strong Writing Isn’t Enough

An Agent’s Perspective

Jan 4 • Renee Fountain

Subtext: Things Your Characters Shouldn’t Say

How to say, without telling.

Dec 21, 2025 • Renee Fountain

Direct Thought vs. Interiority: Getting Inside Your Character’s Mind

Going Beyond Those Awkward "She thought" Tags...

Dec 7, 2025 • Renee Fountain

Front-loading Backstory: Opening Pages Shouldn't Read Like a Wikipedia Entry

Start the Story in the Right Place

Sep 19, 2025 • Renee Fountain

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